Illustration: Katrina Kittle, 2026

Abstract

Drawing of Katrina Kittle: Break up with adverbs and put adjectives on probation. Instead, show a character\u27s emotions by using expressions, gestures, props. Session title: Show, Don\u27t Tell (OK, but How?) Session description: Every single creative writing book — and writing instructor — tells you to “show, don’t tell,” but many writers want to know how exactly to do that. In this session, you’ll look at tips for showing emotion, backstory and description. After a look at published samples, several exercises will help you show the important stuff in your own work.https://ecommons.udayton.edu/ebww_eckstein/1062/thumbnail.jp